I Can't Jump (March 2017 song)

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  1. SilverBeat

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    My newest song is "I Can't Jump". I used one of the episodes from the tv show "Cheers", as the blue print for this one.
    https://www.reverbnation.com/silverbeat/song/27777090-i-cant-jump

    First there's the shock
    Than There's pain
    Than there's the ping pong blame
    I shared my side
    She said I'm right
    Still I sleep alone at night
    And Every night is long without her
    And the reasons that she gone is just a blur

    Chorus

    I'm so bloody sad
    But I can't jump
    I've lost all I had
    But I can't jump
    Every thing gone wrong, yeah it's all bad
    I'm so bloody sad
    But I can't jump

    I lost my joy
    Lost my sun
    I lost her way of fun
    She filled my need
    She made my day
    She left me wishing shed stay
    And every day is dull without her
    And the reasons that she gone is just a blur

    Repeat chorus

    My whole world's been so much duller
    Since she's been gone my life been smaller
    I've been such a mess, but I can't jump

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