Dolora - An Original Song Recorded on dp-03sd

[VelcroJonze]

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https://soundcloud.com/user-71329120/dolora

This is an original song I wrote many moons ago but finally got around to redoing it on some better hardware. Thanks for giving it a listen.
-vj

You can kill me slowly while I bleed
Assassinate my notion while I plead
Hide your calloused speculation
Re-create associations
I’m left in doubt all along/all alone

Every time I dream/drink
There are places in between
Going up and through and under
Through obscene, enhancing wonders
And they all laughed all along

My problem has always been internally/eternally
Far below aloft in secrecy
Because I’m dumb and I’m blind

Pulled me underwater while I drowned
Stabbed me in the back while I was down
Thinking I was what I’m not
Conditions are just
I deserved what I got
I lived a lie, all alone/ all along

©2018 odomodometer

 

[.Strat Brat]

Has a Pink Floyd feel to it, Velcro. Your voice is a little quiet for these old ears to pick out from the lush production, though that doesn't detract from the laid-back feel of the song.

 

[VelcroJonze]

Thanks for the response .Srat Brat. Saying it has a Pink Floyd feel to it is a great compliment. They are one of my favorite bands of all time. I've always been timid when it comes to my vocals, and usually turn them down when I am mixing tracks. Thanks so much for the listen.