https://soundcloud.com/alexxxiii/walls
Just looking for critique on the songwriting - thanks
Recorded live take of vocals and guitar in one mic and harmonies added in post - so very raw/rough again.
Lyrics:
Aren’t you tired on building
boxes to put people in
Judging by names and skins
and places where lives begin
Aren’t you tired
Aren’t you lonely
Looking out from within
It all looks so exhausting
Your compartmentalising
How would you feel
To be defined
Do you know of the things we could achieve
If you’d only open your mind
And, Let down your walls
Let people in
Let down your walls
Let love win
Are you scared of what you don’t know
Of the things that you’ve been told
Ignorance is blissful
But kindness defeats it all
How would you feel
To be defined
Do you know of the things we could achieve
If you’d only open your mind
Don’t build a wall
Walls don’t solve a thing
Please don’t build a wall
Walls solve nothing
So let down your walls
Let people in
Let down your walls
Let people in, Let Love win, Let people in,
Let love win, Let people in
Just looking for critique on the songwriting - thanks
Recorded live take of vocals and guitar in one mic and harmonies added in post - so very raw/rough again.
Lyrics:
Aren’t you tired on building
boxes to put people in
Judging by names and skins
and places where lives begin
Aren’t you tired
Aren’t you lonely
Looking out from within
It all looks so exhausting
Your compartmentalising
How would you feel
To be defined
Do you know of the things we could achieve
If you’d only open your mind
And, Let down your walls
Let people in
Let down your walls
Let love win
Are you scared of what you don’t know
Of the things that you’ve been told
Ignorance is blissful
But kindness defeats it all
How would you feel
To be defined
Do you know of the things we could achieve
If you’d only open your mind
Don’t build a wall
Walls don’t solve a thing
Please don’t build a wall
Walls solve nothing
So let down your walls
Let people in
Let down your walls
Let people in, Let Love win, Let people in,
Let love win, Let people in
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